I notice that on our site that you do not begin the text for our website the way the index page was written.?

Please look at our website, www.2headsarebetterthanone.com You begin in the middle of a sentence and not the way the text was written on our site: Dual head shower head, two-2 head showerhead replacement, double shower head by DSA (manufacturer-distributor).



How do we get this problem changed to the way we want our text posted?I notice that on our site that you do not begin the text for our website the way the index page was written.?
Head over to the Web/html design tutorial section at http://webdesign.about.com/

Jennifer covers all subjects of Web design and html markup and the other things to make your Web page do what you want. You can even post for a critique in the forums.



Her current lead article is:

';Do you write good? ;-)

';Writing well for the Web takes more than just a spell-checker and basic language skills. Web writing is a different format than writing for other media. These ten tips will help you create Web pages that are well-written and easy for your customers to follow.



'; * 10 Tips for Good Web Writing';I notice that on our site that you do not begin the text for our website the way the index page was written.?
I'm sorry to say, but what an awful site! It's ugly for one thing, and it's markup even worse...



Start by fixing those 39 errors found in the W3C Validator... It might help. Maybe not on this perticulair problem, but in general.